Archive 4 checkpoints (1-4)
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# Manuscript rewrite of 2026-10-10 (from the paper-summary deck)
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**Request (user, 2026-10-10):** rewrite the paper from scratch on the basis of the current deck, with Figure 6 marked
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"to be continued".
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**Source of truth:** the paper-summary deck
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`immun-pbmc-fm/model_8_sparse_data_diffusion/presentations/2026-09-30--paper-summary--r00/`, as rebuilt on 2026-10-10
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(76 slides).
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- Slide text, notes and full footnotes were the primary source.
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- The deck's `data/*.csv` tables were used to check numbers. Their rows carry source paths.
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- The figure split follows `data/figure_plan.json`.
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- The previous manuscript (a different story, older checkpoints) was not used as a content source. Only method facts were
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reused, after re-checking them against the code and run records.
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**Previous version:** `archive/pre_rewrite_20261010/` holds sections/, main.tex, supplementary.tex, tables/,
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references.bib, both PDFs, and the git HEAD and status at the time of the rewrite. This includes the uncommitted
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2026-10-06 Figure 1 redesign edits. `archive/` is git-ignored, so this copy is local and in the paper archive delta.
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## Structure
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| Main text | `sections/abstract.tex`, `introduction.tex`, `results_fig1..6.tex`, `discussion.tex` | About 5,500 words. Abstract 200 words. |
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| Methods | `sections/methods_model.tex`, `methods_paired.tex`, `methods_eval.tex` | Very descriptive, per the Nature-style guide. |
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| Figures | `sections/fig1..6.tex`, `figures/deck_20261010/` | Deck vector panels placed as-is. |
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| Supplementary | `supplementary.tex`; `sections/supp_notes.tex`, `supp_methods_model.tex`, `supp_methods_eval.tex`, `supp_table_cohorts.tex`, `supp_tables.tex`, `supp_figures.tex` | 5 Notes, Methods, 4 Tables, 17 Figures. |
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| Shared | `macros.tex`, `references.bib` | Figure macros, `\todo{}` and 55 cited references (every entry is cited). |
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Figures are typeset after the references, each starting on a new page, with the legend after the panels. A figure may
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run over more than one page because the deck panels are slide-sized. Provenance and sha256 of every copied panel are in
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`figures/deck_20261010/PROVENANCE.json`. The 180 mm journal layouts are still to be drawn.
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Figure 6 ("Discovery from public bulk-only data") is a placeholder. The text states only what was generated: LoRA-5 cells
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for 122 sepsis and 164 COVID-19 haemodialysis bulk-only samples, at K = 1,000 and K = 4,000. No findings are reported.
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Chosen: "Five paired donors and minutes of fine-tuning turn blood bulk RNA-seq into single cells" (14 words). Other
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candidates: "Single blood cells generated from bulk RNA-seq carry disease signal beyond the bulk" and "A few paired samples
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and minutes of fine-tuning turn blood bulk RNA-seq into single cells".
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## Rules applied (user decisions, 2026-10-06 to 10-08)
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- The main comparison is LoRA-5 vs scSemiProfiler-5, with the same five donors and five draws per cohort. 5-fold CV is
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reported separately and is never the head-to-head.
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- No bulk-broadcast baseline anywhere.
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- The deck figure `sec04_metrics_overview` (Fig. 2d) still listed it as a comparator.
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- It was redrawn on 2026-10-10 (`tools/sec04_metrics_overview.py`; old files in the deck's
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`_archive/2026-10-10_metrics_overview_broadcast/`) and the deck was rebuilt.
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- Partial r, the cell-type signal beyond the bulk, is emphasised. So is the 5-fold disease logFC r of 0.82 (Imperial).
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- Time counts per-cohort GPU work only: no PBISC pretraining and no queue waits.
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- No PBISC-VAE, no refcal, no TPM input variants in the main text. Gene-wise calibration is a comparator.
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- BayesPrism and CIBERSORTx are always called cell-type deconvolution.
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- Modified-baseline runs appear in the Supplementary only (Note 4, Fig. 17). The from-scratch pilot is in the
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Supplementary (Note 3, Fig. 16) and is framed positively in the Discussion.
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- Style: thesis first, bold lead-in keywords, short body, `[TODO]` for unfinished work, British spelling, no Korean.
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coordinator wrote the Fig. 6 placeholder.
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2. Test compile with tectonic.
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3. Eleven adversarial checkers (one per file group) traced every number and claim to the deck text, the deck data, the
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plan READMEs and the code. Fixers applied the confirmed corrections (about 265).
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4. A separate agent wrote the abstract, introduction and discussion, which were then checked and fixed the same way.
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The references were built and checked against Crossref and the reference PDFs.
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5. The coordinator made the cross-file fixes and wrote the Fig. 6 text.
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6. The main text was tightened from 6,364 to 5,543 words. An old-vs-new check restored 39 losses (definitions,
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qualifiers, citations).
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7. A whole-paper review covered consistency, cross-references, rules and a referee read (three reviewers, 43 issues),
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followed by per-file fixes, a few coordinator fixes and a final compile. Both documents compile with no undefined
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reference, no overfull box and no bibliography warning (main 48 pages, Supplementary 46 pages).
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## Conflicts between the deck and its sources, resolved in the text
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- **SLE cohort (GSE135779).** The 42 scored donors are children and adults (25 cSLE, 5 aSLE, 8 cHD, 4 aHD), not a
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childhood-only cohort. It also chose the width and gene panel, so the text calls it a development cohort.
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- **Corpus shares.** 88.5% healthy and 23.6% in vitro are shares of cells, not of donors.
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- **Top-up recipes.** They make every training cell a target at least once, not exactly once.
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- **Rare states (Fig. 5).** The analysis unit is the scored sample (several per donor in Imperial, Giroux and Ji).
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"Donor ranking" therefore means Spearman over test samples. The deck axis label is kept.
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- **Bulk-only cells at K = 1,000.** The five draws shared one sampling seed, so they are not independent. Only the
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K = 4,000 set has a separate seed for each draw.
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- **scSemiProfiler vs copying its representative.** It was never *significantly* better than the copy (Imperial 0.602 vs
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0.608, P = 0.91), not "never better".
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- **CIBERSORTx top-50 DEG.** 6 of 17 scored draws. Three draws had no imputed contrast genes and are unscored.
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- **Composition wins vs scSemiProfiler-5.** 4 of 5 cohorts by the draw verdict; 5 of 5 by cohort means. The text names
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the criterion each time.
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- **Behçet.** The bulk and single-cell donors are mostly different people. Three patients were matched afterwards by
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expression; they are used only by the LoRA-3 to-do.
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- **Width-arm parameter counts.** Taken from the run records (102,106,848 and 312,649,440), not from the old manuscript.
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## Open items (`\todo{}` in the text)
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- **Fig. 5d.** The LoRA-3 Behçet arm.
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- **Fig. 5e.** Rare states in cohorts absent from the corpus (Kawasaki MS1, SLE ISG-high T).
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- **Release links.** Model, LoRA weights, code, generated cells, Source Data and a Zenodo DOI.
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- **Corpus datasets.** The list of the 22 corpus datasets with accessions; some CELLxGENE entries lack a collection ID.
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- The deck was rebuilt after each change (76 slides). Old files are in the deck's `_archive/2026-10-10_*` folders.
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## Data oddity found during the rewrite (not used in any claim)
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scSemiProfiler's pooled coverage in the equal-pair-budget runs at n = 40 equals its 5-fold value to the last digit, in
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both ImMicro (617 of 16,050 real cells) and sepsis (1,181 of 12,300). Yet per-donor coverage differs for most donors, and
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noted below, after checking them against the current sources.
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Venue and audience: **Nature Communications Article**, read by immunologists and computational biologists. They care
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about results, not ML novelty: what the cells are good for, how few paired samples are needed, how fast it is, and
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how it compares with the methods they know.
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## 0. Paths
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| What | Path |
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| Deck text, every slide incl. speaker notes and full footnotes (PRIMARY SOURCE) | `/tmp/claude-1000/-home-sj-server-1/cd3948fe-c9dc-46c9-874d-211078d8ba7a/scratchpad/paper/deck_text.txt` |
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| Deck folder | `/home/sj_server_1/PBISC/immun-pbmc-fm/model_8_sparse_data_diffusion/presentations/2026-09-30--paper-summary--r00/` (`DECK/` below) |
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| Deck data behind every slide (CSV/JSON; most rows carry a `source` path) | `DECK/data/` |
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| Deck figure scripts | `DECK/tools/` |
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| Deck figures (vector PDF per slide figure) | `DECK/figures/<name>.pdf` |
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| Figure plan (single source of the figure split) | `DECK/data/figure_plan.json` |
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| Deck README (change log, decisions) | `DECK/README.md` |
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| Model 8 project root (`M8/` below) | `/home/sj_server_1/PBISC/immun-pbmc-fm/model_8_sparse_data_diffusion/` |
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| Paired fine-tuning plan (cohorts, splits, LoRA, scoring) | `M8/plans/paired_finetune_intradataset_20260927/` (README.md, data/<cohort>/QC_REPORT.md, tools/) |
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| Deconvolution comparison | `M8/plans/bayesprism_paired_20261006/` |
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| Rare states (Fig. 5) | `M8/plans/rare_states_paired_20261008/`, `M8/plans/rare_states_screen_20261004/` |
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| Bulk-only generation (Fig. 6, placeholder only) | `M8/plans/bulkonly_lora5_20261006/`, `M8/plans/bulkonly_lora5_k4000_20261006/` |
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| Final model run | `M8/runs/f01_6k_1x_seed20260627/` (effective_config.json, RUN_STATUS.json, ALLCELL_DATA_CONTRACT.json) |
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| Model source code | `M8/src/pbisc_sdd/` |
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| Old manuscript (method facts only) | `/home/sj_server_1/PBISC/paper-release-20260928/manuscript/` (`sections/methods.tex`, `sections/supplementary_methods.tex`, `source_data/corpus/`) |
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| Reference PDFs and index (citation metadata, DOIs) | `/home/sj_server_1/PBISC/paper-release-20260928/reference-papers/INDEX.md` |
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| Staging folder for ALL outputs | `/tmp/claude-1000/-home-sj-server-1/cd3948fe-c9dc-46c9-874d-211078d8ba7a/scratchpad/paper/draft/` |
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Do not modify anything outside the staging folder. CPU only; never start GPU work. Never print credential files.
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## 1. Rules from the user (mandatory)
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1. **Main comparison = 5 paired donors.** LoRA-5 (LoRA fine-tuned on the pairs of 5 donors) vs **scSemiProfiler-5**
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(scSemiProfiler given the same 5 donors' single cells as representatives). 5 draws per cohort; test = every other
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usable sample, from its real bulk. This is the head-to-head claim.
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2. **5-fold CV is reported separately**, as an additional result, never mixed into the main 5-pair claim and never
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called the head-to-head comparison.
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3. **No bulk-broadcast baseline** (bulk logFC copied to every cell type). Do not mention it anywhere, not even as a
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control. Partial r stays (it uses the bulk only as a covariate).
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4. **Emphasise partial r** = "cell-type signal beyond the bulk": logFC r after both logFCs are residualised on the input
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bulk's logFC. Present it as what single cells add over bulk.
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5. **Emphasise that LoRA reaches disease logFC r = 0.82** (Imperial, 5-fold). This is remarkable. Do not compare it with
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the split-half ceiling as if it were a shortfall; do not mention the ceiling in a way that diminishes it.
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6. **Time:** count only per-cohort GPU time (scSemiProfiler: pretraining of each representative + one model per test
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sample; LoRA: fine-tune + sampling). **Never add PBISC pretraining (15.9 h)** to LoRA's time and never mention GPU
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queue waits. Neither method's provided assets are counted. Time is a main result: scSemiProfiler takes days, LoRA
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minutes.
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7. **Wording:** do not claim "recovers paired single cells" / "paired-sc level". Do claim that PBISC-Diffusion with LoRA is
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the best of the tested methods, with numbers.
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8. **No PBISC-VAE** anywhere. **No "refcal"/reference calibration/AIFI anchoring.** No TPM input variants in the main
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text. "Gene-wise calibration" (alpha_g = mean pseudobulk CPM / mean bulk CPM over the paired training donors) IS a
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comparator: show zero-shot (real bulk as measured) and zero-shot + calibration.
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9. Do not frame pretraining as an unfair advantage or a "fairness caveat". Pretraining is part of the method.
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10. A run that modifies a baseline's official behaviour (scSemiProfiler without its output threshold) is a
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Supplementary-only sensitivity check, labelled "modified, not the official output". Main text uses official output.
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11. BayesPrism and CIBERSORTx are **cell-type deconvolution** (fractions and per-type expression, not single cells);
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say so every time they appear.
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12. From-scratch (no pretraining) results are **Supplementary**, framed positively in the Discussion as a route to
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other tissues (pilot: sepsis fold 0 only; folds 1–4 pending). Keep the pretraining advantages explicit (5-pair
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donor composition r 0.70 vs 0.17; cycling T/NK closer 8 of 8; minutes vs ~1 h per cohort).
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13. **Figure 6 is "to be continued".** Only a placeholder subsection and a placeholder figure. State what exists (LoRA-5
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cells generated for the bulk-only samples: sepsis 122, COVID-19 haemodialysis 164, at K = 1,000 and K = 4,000) and
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mark the analysis `\todo{...}`. Report NO findings and do not mention earlier screens.
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14. Honest caveats belong in the text, briefly, where a reviewer would look: Giroux (5-donor test sets of 2 vs 2
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subjects; scSemiProfiler ahead there), sepsis equal-budget logFC r where scSemiProfiler is higher, generated vs real
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still separable by a classifier (AUC ~0.9), most rare states generated below their observed fraction, zero-shot
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closer on some rare-state fractions. State them as facts with numbers, without hedging the main claims.
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## 2. Style (user's standing rules for this manuscript)
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- **Thesis first.** Every paragraph opens with its claim; evidence follows. Results subsection titles are claims.
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- **Bold lead-in keywords**: `\textbf{Five pairs are enough.} ...` style, at most one per paragraph.
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- **Short body.** Off-thread experiments get one sentence and a pointer to the Supplementary.
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- **Plain English.** Short sentences with verbs, common words. No symbol strings ("→", "≈", "·") in prose; no lists of
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fragments. Define every technical term at first use in each part (e.g. "coverage, the share of real cells with a
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generated neighbour").
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- Every number comes with what it is, which data and the comparator: "coverage 0.79 vs 0.04 for scSemiProfiler-5
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(ImMicro, 5 draws)". Use counts of wins as "in 13 of 20 draws".
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- `\todo{...}` for anything not done yet (macro defined in main.tex; renders red). Never invent a result.
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- **No Korean anywhere.** British spelling (normalised, modelling, colour, haemodialysis). Use "pseudobulk", "single-cell"
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(adj.), "scRNA-seq", "logFC", "top-50 DEG", "5-fold cross-validation (CV)".
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- Nature Communications limits (targets): title ≤ 15 words; abstract ≤ 200 words, no references; main text
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(Intro + Results + Discussion) about 5,000 words; legends ≤ 350 words each; Discussion without subheadings.
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+
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## 3. Terms (use exactly)
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- **\method{}** = PBISC-Diffusion (macro). The pretrained model = "the pretrained model" / "\method{}".
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- **zero-shot** = pretrained model fed the real bulk as measured. **zero-shot + calibration** = fed the bulk after
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gene-wise calibration fitted on the same training pairs.
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- **LoRA-5** = LoRA (rank 16) fine-tuned on all pairs of 5 donors, fixed 3,000 steps; **scSemiProfiler-5**.
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- **5-fold CV**: donor-level; every sample generated by the fold model that never trained on it; one pooled scoring
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call per method; scSemiProfiler's representatives = exactly LoRA's training (+ inner-validation) pairs.
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- **pairs-needed curves** ("learning curve"): inside the 5-fold design, n = 5, 10, 20, 40 or all training pairs per fold,
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early-stopped on 7–8 inner-validation pairs. These "5 pairs" are NOT the 5-donor draws; say which one you mean.
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+
- Cell metrics: **precision** (share of generated cells inside the k-NN ball of a real cell; Kynkäänniemi 2019),
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| 105 |
+
**coverage** (share of real cells with a generated cell inside their k-NN ball; Naeem 2020), k = 10, PCA-50 fitted on
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real cells; **composition L1** over six scANVI cell types (lower is better); **classifier AUC** (kNN classifier
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| 107 |
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two-sample test, 0.5 = indistinguishable); **MMD²**; **E_N** (scSemiProfiler's own normalised error, Wang 2024).
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| 108 |
+
- Disease metrics: **logFC r** (Pearson r of case-vs-control logFC per cell type, generated vs observed, mean over T,
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+
B, monocyte, NK); **partial r**; **top-50 DEG** overlap (Welch + BH, summed over types); **CAT** (correspondence at
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| 110 |
+
the top, Irizarry 2005).
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- Cohorts: ImMicro (107 healthy donors; Babdor 2026); Ye 2026 sepsis ("sepsis"); Imperial COVID-19 haemodialysis
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("Imperial"; bulk Gisby 2022, CITE-seq Stephenson 2025); Giroux 2022 COVID-19 outpatients ("Giroux"); Ji 2025
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checkpoint-inhibitor liver injury ("Ji", whole-blood bulk); childhood SLE GSE135779 (Nehar-Belaid 2020); Behçet
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disease (bulk GSE198533, sc GSE198616; Zheng 2022).
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+
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+
## 4. Manuscript structure, owners and word targets
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+
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Main text (`main.tex` inputs, in order): title; abstract; Introduction (650 words); Results = six subsections
|
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+
(Fig.1 550, Fig.2 800, Fig.3 600, Fig.4 950, Fig.5 550, Fig.6 placeholder ~120); Discussion (750); Methods (very
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| 120 |
+
descriptive; ~4,500 words over three files, overflow to Supplementary Methods); declarations; references; then the
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figures with legends (each figure starts on a new page).
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+
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Results subsections map to deck slides (the deck text has "===== SLIDE n" markers):
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+
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| Results / Figure | Deck slides (main panels) | Details slides usable as Supplementary |
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| 126 |
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|---|---|---|
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| 127 |
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| Fig. 1 Design and performance | 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12 | 13, 14 |
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| 128 |
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| Fig. 2 Fine-tuning with LoRA (healthy ImMicro only; NO disease metrics) | 17–27 | — |
|
| 129 |
+
| Fig. 3 vs scSemiProfiler on healthy donors + time | 30–34 | 62, 63 |
|
| 130 |
+
| Fig. 4 Disease signal, paired cohorts | 37–43 | 44, 45, 46 |
|
| 131 |
+
| Fig. 5 Rare cell states | 49–52 (+ planned 5e) | 72 |
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| 132 |
+
| Fig. 6 Bulk-only discovery | placeholder | — |
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| 133 |
+
| Supplementary | 58–72, 74 | |
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| 134 |
+
| Discussion | 76 (+ caveats) | |
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| 135 |
+
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| 136 |
+
## 5. Figures: panel → deck PDF (copied later to `figures/deck_20261010/<name>.pdf`)
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| 137 |
+
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| 138 |
+
Main figures (write `\includegraphics` paths exactly as `figures/deck_20261010/<name>.pdf`):
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| 139 |
+
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| 140 |
+
- **Fig. 1** a `sec02_backbone_compare`; b `fig01_architecture_nature` (manuscript figure, Nature-style overview);
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| 141 |
+
c `sec02_bulk_conditioning`; d `fig01_corpus_nature` (manuscript figure); e `sec03_width_loss` + `sec03_width_bench`;
|
| 142 |
+
f `sec03_panel`.
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| 143 |
+
- **Fig. 2** a `sec05_condition_space` + `sec05_shift_cohorts`; b `sec05_cells_umap` + `sec05_cells_metrics`;
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| 144 |
+
c `sec06_ft_method` + `sec06_eval_design`; d `sec04_metrics_overview`; e `fig2_healthy_cells`;
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| 145 |
+
f `fig2_healthy_realism`; g `fig2_healthy_modes`; h `fig2_healthy_pairs`; i `fig2_healthy_rank`.
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+
- **Fig. 3** a `fig3_healthy_fewpair`; b `fig3_healthy_pairs`; c `fig3_healthy_copy`; d `fig3_time_days` +
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| 147 |
+
`sec09_time_to_apply`.
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+
- **Fig. 4** a `sec09_cohorts`; b `fig4_disease_fewpair`; c `fig4_disease_fivefold`; d `sec09_cat_curves`;
|
| 149 |
+
e `secS_deconv_disease`; f `sec04_sle_benchmark` + `sec04_sle_per_celltype`.
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| 150 |
+
- **Fig. 5** a `fig5_rare_fraction`; b `fig5_rare_donors`; c `fig5_rare_fivefold`; d `sec05_behcet_direction`
|
| 151 |
+
(status Adapt: the LoRA-3 Behçet result is to be added → `\todo`); e planned panel (Kawasaki MS1, SLE ISG-high T;
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+
status Build → `\todo`, no image).
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| 153 |
+
- **Fig. 6** placeholder box only (macro `\tbcpanel{...}`), no deck image.
|
| 154 |
+
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| 155 |
+
Supplementary Figures (fixed numbering; refer to them as "Supplementary Fig.~N" in plain text):
|
| 156 |
+
|
| 157 |
+
| # | Content | Deck PDF(s) | Deck slide |
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| 158 |
+
|---|---|---|---|
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| 1 | Pretraining corpus, detailed | manuscript `figS_corpus` | 9 |
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| 160 |
+
| 2 | Model details: training pairs and denoiser | `sec01_slide_a`, `sec01_fig1a_denoiser` | 13, 14 |
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| 161 |
+
| 3 | 5 donors, all five cohorts: cell metrics | `sec09_fewpair_cells` | 58 |
|
| 162 |
+
| 4 | 5 donors: realism beyond precision/coverage | `sec09_extra_fewpair` | 59 |
|
| 163 |
+
| 5 | 5 donors: precision/coverage at k = 3, 5, 10 | `sec09_extra_ksens` | 60 |
|
| 164 |
+
| 6 | 5-fold CV: realism metrics, all cohorts | `sec09_extra_fivefold` | 61 |
|
| 165 |
+
| 7 | Same training pairs (5-fold): LoRA vs scSemiProfiler | `sec09_same_pairs` | 62 |
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| 8 | scSemiProfiler copies its representative, all cohorts | `sec09_scsemi_representative` | 63 |
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| 167 |
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| 9 | Full fine-tuning vs LoRA vs condition-encoder-only | `sec07_ft_modes` | 64 |
|
| 168 |
+
| 10 | Pairs needed: composition, coverage, training steps | `sec08_pairs_realism` | 65 |
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| 169 |
+
| 11 | Pairs needed: donor and disease signal | `sec08_pairs_signal` | 45 |
|
| 170 |
+
| 12 | LoRA rank and K diversification | `sec07_rank_sweep`, `sec07_k_aug` | 66, 67 |
|
| 171 |
+
| 13 | Sepsis: fine-tuning variants | `fig4_disease_variants` | 44 |
|
| 172 |
+
| 14 | Cell-type deconvolution: composition | `secS_deconv_composition` | 46 |
|
| 173 |
+
| 15 | Pairs from other cohorts do not transfer | `sec08_cross_cohort`, `sec08_cross_cohort_steps` | 68, 69 |
|
| 174 |
+
| 16 | Training without pretraining (same cohort, other cohorts, rare states) | `sec07_no_pretraining`, `sec08_cross_scratch`, `secS_scratch_rare_states` | 70, 71, 72 |
|
| 175 |
+
| 17 | scSemiProfiler without its output threshold (modified, sensitivity only) | `secA_scsemi_readout` | 74 |
|
| 176 |
+
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| 177 |
+
Supplementary Notes (fixed numbering): 1 Pretraining corpus; 2 One LoRA per cohort: pairs from other cohorts;
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| 178 |
+
3 Training without pretraining; 4 scSemiProfiler read-out sensitivity; 5 scSemiProfiler representative choice.
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| 179 |
+
Supplementary Tables: 1 Paired cohorts and contrasts; 2 Per-cohort values of the 5-donor comparison; 3 Per-cohort
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| 180 |
+
values of the 5-fold comparison; 4 GPU time per cohort. (Tables may be built by the supplementary agent from DECK/data.)
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+
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| 182 |
+
LaTeX macros available (defined in main.tex / supplementary.tex; do not redefine):
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+
```
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+
\method{} PBISC-Diffusion
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+
\todo{text} red [TODO: text]
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+
\mainfigure{label}{Title sentence} starts a new page, numbers the figure, prints "Figure N | Title"
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+
\figpanel{a}{figures/deck_20261010/name.pdf} one panel image, full width (max 0.31\textheight)
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\figpanelh{a}{file}{0.25} same with an explicit max height as a fraction of \textheight
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\figpanelpair{a}{fileA}{fileB}{0.48}{0.48} two images side by side at the given widths (fraction of \textwidth)
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\tbcpanel{text} framed "To be continued" box with text
|
| 191 |
+
\figlegend{...} the legend paragraph (bold title sentence first, then **a**, ... panel descriptions)
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| 192 |
+
\suppfigure{label}{Title} like \mainfigure for Supplementary Fig. N
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+
```
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+
Example of one main figure block (the figure file holds only this):
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| 195 |
+
```
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+
\mainfigure{fig:fig3}{LoRA cells are closer to real cells than scSemiProfiler's, in minutes instead of days}
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| 197 |
+
\figpanel{a}{figures/deck_20261010/fig3_healthy_fewpair.pdf}
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+
...
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\figlegend{\textbf{LoRA-5 against scSemiProfiler-5 on healthy donors.} \textbf{a}, ... \textbf{b}, ...}
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| 200 |
+
```
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+
Refer to panels in text as `Fig.~\ref{fig:fig3}a` (labels: `fig:fig1` ... `fig:fig6`). Citations: `\cite{key}` placed
|
| 202 |
+
before the period with no space (`... bulk\cite{wang2024scsemiprofiler}.`).
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+
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| 204 |
+
## 6. Citation keys (use these; if you need another, use a key `firstauthorYEARword` and list it in your return value
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+
with the full reference so the references agent can build it)
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+
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+
Existing in references.bib: `ostheimer2025sparse` (SDD backbone), `luo2024scdiffusion`, `ho2020ddpm`, `song2021ddim`,
|
| 208 |
+
`wang2024scsemiprofiler`, `newman2019cibersortx`, `chu2022bayesprism`, `avilacobos2020benchmarking`, `lopez2018scvi`,
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+
`cui2024scgpt`, `theodoris2023geneformer`, `nehar2020mapping` (GSE135779 childhood SLE), `benjamini1995fdr`,
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+
`robinson2010edger`, `mcinnes2018umap`, `babdor2026immicro` (ImMicro), `randolph2021genetic`, `zheng2022c1qbehcet`.
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+
New (to be added): `hu2022lora`, `kynkaanniemi2019improved`, `naeem2020reliable`, `lopezpaz2017revisiting`,
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+
`gretton2012kernel`, `irizarry2005multiple`, `webber2010similarity`, `squair2021confronting`, `vinastorne2026systema`,
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`roohani2024gears`, `li2026systematic`, `khayatkhoei2023emergent`, `law2014voom`, `xu2021scanvi`, `gong2025multiomic`
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(AIFI immune health atlas), `ye2026sepsis`, `gisby2022multiomics`, `stephenson2025temporal`, `giroux2022differential`,
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+
`ji2025chili`, `reyes2020immune` (MS1), `tukiainen2017landscape` (X escape genes), `arunachalam2020systems`,
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+
`liu2021timeresolved`, `wang2021kawasaki`, `nichol2021improved` (cosine schedule), `chen2023analog` (self-conditioning),
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+
`loshchilov2019decoupled` (AdamW).
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+
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+
## 7. Numbers discipline
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- Take every number from the deck text (slide keywords, notes, full footnotes) or from `DECK/data/*.csv`. If two sources
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+
disagree, use the CSV and report the conflict in your return value.
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+
- Round as the deck does (r to 2 decimals; L1 to 2–3 decimals; coverage to 2 decimals). Keep the n and the unit.
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+
- Never compute new statistics unless you state exactly how and from which file (and the verifier can redo it).
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+
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+
## 7b. Resolved decisions after the first drafts (2026-10-10; these OVERRIDE anything above)
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1. **SLE cohort GSE135779 is children AND adults**: the 42 scored donors are 25 childhood SLE, 5 adult SLE, 8 childhood
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+
and 4 adult controls (30 SLE, 12 controls). Never write "childhood SLE" or "paediatric" for it. Write "an SLE cohort
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+
of children and adults (GSE135779)". It is not in the pretraining corpus, but SLE itself is (Perez 2022 adult SLE;
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+
GSE163121 SLE B cells), so say "cohort absent from the corpus", never "disease absent from the corpus".
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2. **The SLE cohort was used to choose the design** (width, gene panel; Fig. 1e,f), so it is a development cohort, not
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an untouched test set. Fig. 4f text and the Discussion say so once. The final model was fixed before any paired
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cohort was used.
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3. **Corpus shares are shares of cells**: 88.5% of cells from healthy donors, 23.6% of cells cultured in vitro.
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4. **Top-up recipes make every training cell a target at least once** (not "exactly once").
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5. **Rare states (Fig. 5)**: the unit in the analysis code is the scored *sample* (Imperial, Giroux and Ji have several
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samples per donor). Inclusion = at least 30 observed state cells (native depth) in at least 3 samples; ranking =
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Spearman over test samples. Use "samples" in text and legends. Plasmablast definition: cite `mathew2020deep`
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(not arunachalam2020systems).
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6. **Bulk-only K = 1,000 draws shared one sampling seed** (cell slot noise shared across draws); only the K = 4,000
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set has per-draw seeds. Never call the K = 1,000 draws "independent".
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7. **Width-arm parameter counts**: use the run records (102,106,848 and 312,649,440), not the old manuscript values.
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8. **Annotator**: final model and paired cohorts use the frozen scANVI annotator `aifi_scanvi_f01common_v1` (1,005
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genes; L2 accuracy 0.869, macro-F1 0.850; six-type gate 0.992 / 0.981); the width/proportion-hint ablations used the
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2,980-gene annotator (0.889 / 0.870). Do not quote 0.880 / 0.860 (an annotator not used here).
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9. **Metric definitions differ between benchmarks**: paired cohorts: logFC r = mean over T, B, monocyte, NK (mean CP10K);
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top-50 DEG = Welch + BH (FDR < 0.05) overlap summed over T, B, monocyte, NK, DC (max 250); CAT = mean over T, B,
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monocyte, NK. SLE benchmark: logFC r and partial r averaged over six types (incl. DC and Other) on log(1+CPM); top-50
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summed over six types. Say which one applies.
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10. **Batches in LoRA training are pair-balanced** (a sample pair drawn uniformly, then a cell), not donor-balanced.
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11. **Inner validation**: 7 pairs (ImMicro), 7–8 (sepsis), ~10% of donors elsewhere (Imperial 5 patients, Giroux 1–2
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subjects, Ji 2 patients).
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12. **Identity checks** are sex-gene and expression-match checks; there is no genotype check.
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13. **Behçet**: no designed pairs; the bulk (9 BD, 10 HC) and single-cell donors (4 BD, 4 HC) are mostly different people
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(three BD donors were matched afterwards by expression; used only by the LoRA-3 to-do). Panel 5d uses a looser C1Q
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rule (any C1Q gene) than Fig. 5a–c (at least 2 of 3).
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14. **scSemiProfiler vs copying its representative**: "never significantly better than the copy" (Imperial 0.602 vs
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0.608, P = 0.91), significantly worse in three of five cohorts.
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15. **CIBERSORTx top-50 DEG**: 6 of 17 scored draws (3 draws had no imputed contrast genes and are unscored).
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16. **Composition wins of LoRA-5 vs scSemiProfiler-5 across cohorts**: 4 of 5 cohorts by the deck's draw verdict
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(>= 80% of draws; Giroux 3 of 5 draws); 5 of 5 by cohort means. Always name the criterion.
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17. **Deck figure for Fig. 2d was redrawn** without the bulk-broadcast comparator (logFC r row now reads "zero-shot;
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partial r (vs bulk)"). Remove any LaTeX comment or to-do about that redraw.
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18. **Rare-state averaging**: a draw in which a method generated no cell of a state is skipped in the mean log2 ratio;
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a state never generated in any draw counts as that method's miss. State this in Methods.
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## 8. Return value
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Return a short JSON-like summary: files written (absolute paths), word count per file, every `\todo` you left, every
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citation key used, any new keys requested (with full reference), and any conflicts or doubts about numbers.
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