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 - Runs completely offline. 
 - Includes nine commonly used Python data science packages.
 
-This aggressively private local setup would be overkill for most people. The main benefit is the ability to copy and share the entire enivironment. This feature is useful in places where there's no internet. Another benefit is the experience one gains from building an air-gapped system like this.
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 ## What packages are included?
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 ## What problem does this solve?
 
-It solves two often overlooked problems: dependency on a network connection and the inability to easily share sofware directly from one person to another. These features are helpful in places where theres no internet. 
+It solves two often overlooked problems: dependency on a network connection and the difficulty in sharing sofware directly from one person to another. These features are helpful in places where there's no internet or where internet connections are metered and expensive. Satellite internet connections are one example.
 
-Whether you're on a plane, in the field, or at a workshop venue with unreliable Wi-Fi, the Offline Data Lab works without an internet connection. Everything it needs is already there.
+Whether you're on a plane, in the field, or at a workshop venue with unreliable Wi-Fi, the Offline Data Lab just works. Everything it needs is already there.
 
 ## Who is this for?