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 Thousands of fine-tuned models sit on public repositories. Each adds a skill to a shared base model. Their training is already paid for.
 
-**Hypothesis:** that capability can be consolidated into one model per class, without pre-training and without trading one skill for another.
+**Hypothesis:** that capability can be consolidated into one model per class without pre-training, with trade-offs between skills controlled and capability then maximised across the board through iteration.
 
 **Converge** is the programme that tests it, one release at a time, in public.
 

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     <h2>The Thesis</h2>
     <p>Thousands of fine-tuned models sit on public repositories. Each adds a skill to a shared base model. Their training is already paid for.</p>
-    <p><strong>Hypothesis:</strong> that capability can be consolidated into one model per class, without pre-training and without trading one skill for another. Converge is the programme that tests it, one release at a time, in public.</p>
+    <p><strong>Hypothesis:</strong> that capability can be consolidated into one model per class without pre-training, with trade-offs between skills controlled and capability then maximised across the board through iteration. Converge is the programme that tests it, one release at a time, in public.</p>
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