Automated Syntax Feedback (AIEER 2024)
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English essay syntax feedback: Essay-Syntax-Instruct dataset + 3 fine-tuned LLMs. Code: github.com/KamyarZeinalipour/Essay-Syntax-Feedback • 7 items • Updated
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ESSAY: The author concluded the story, “Winter Hibiscus,” with the paragraph she chose because she wanted to portray to her reader that even though Saeng was experiencing a hardship leaving her ol... |
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ESSAY: The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle was the fact that dirigibles contain highly flammable gases. I... |
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ESSAY: In the excerpt, The Mooring Mast, by Marcia Amidon Lüsted, had many obstacles of the construction of the Empire State Building in allowing dirigibles to dock there. The author states "The o... |
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ESSAY: Being patient is not an easy thing to maintain. It takes self control in order to have patience. Having patience is very important because if you have a gon??? and your not patient maugio w... |
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ESSAY: Censorships in the libraris would be liked cutting the worlds air supply. It would be taking away from a readers imagintion. stoping readers from being able to express their mind. My ... |
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ESSAY: Should books, magazines, movies, and music be put in higher reaches of children, or should they be left in plain sight? Is it fair to not be capable to see a movie, magazine, or even read a... |
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ESSAY: I belive certain materials, such as books, music, movies, magazines, etc., should never be removed from libraries because even if offensive people still have the right to acess that informa... |
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ESSAY: In the memoir Narciso Rodriguez the author creates a variety of different moods Throughout the memoir. In paragraph two the author tells how much culture was put into his home "my young par... |
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ESSAY: When you have a loving family and a beautiful home, you should be very grateful. Narciso Rodriguez was also very grateful. The overall mood of Narciso's story is gratefulness. Narciso Rodri... |
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ESSAY: In the passage, the features of the setting affect the cyclist because every time he comes along something different a new idea about his survival comes into his head. First, when the cycli... |
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ESSAY: As I read the article, also called memoir, I didn't so much find a certain mood that the author had created. This memoir is indeed heart warming and touching, though it is very inspirationa... |
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ESSAY: There were many obstacles the builders faced in attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the empire State building. One obstacle they faced is the safety of the passengers when the dirigib... |
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ESSAY: Dear Readers Inc., I Computers is a new technology that keeps on getting better and better. It can do many things like help you learn something new and see new/old friends. Even some people... |
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ESSAY: I think that all the bad books should be taken out of a library. All the bad books, music, magazines and movies no one really wants to read. If a kid picks up the book and reads it, and the... |
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ESSAY: Being able to laugh, is one of the greatest feelings in the world. Having family to share it with is priceless. Family moments like that, are times no one can take away. They will be there ... |
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ESSAY: The builders of the Empire State Building faced many obstacles when they attempted to allow dirigibles to dock there. One obstacle the builders faced was the harsh winds. The Empire State B... |
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ESSAY: The mood created by the author in this memoir is that be proud and happy of who you are no matter what. One example of this mood being showned in the excerpt is when the family moves into t... |
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ESSAY: I would like to state on my behalf that I do not agree that computers are good for society. There are three reasons why I do not agree. Many people will not enjoy the outdoors, many people ... |
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ESSAY: Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion computers are a help to our plant. The new technology makes life easier to handle. The computer are a help because it teaches hand-eye coordination. You ... |
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ESSAY: The builders of the Empire State Building faced a few obstacles when attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. The biggest obstacle was finding a safe way to do it. New York City is a v... |
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ESSAY: In Joe Kurmaskie’s “Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit” the imagery is what sets the cyclist back. The scorching dessert and plant life gives him a sense of seclusion and scares him. Because ... |
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ESSAY: Based on the excerpt, The Mooring Mast by Skyline Publications, there were many challenges the builders of the Empire State building faced while they had high hopes in creating the world's ... |
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ESSAY: One day I asked my parents if I could buy this game that I wanted and this game that I wanted and they asked me how much is it? I said that I did not know how much it is. So he said that we... |
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ESSAY: The builders of the Empire stat building encountered both man made problems and problems from nature while attempting to allow dirigibles to dock there. One main problem was the buildings s... |
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ESSAY: The mood of the memoir is that he is growing up in the house with his Mother and father. His parents giving a hand to people who Need help. One explaination is when his parents moved here a... |
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ESSAY: I think the author adds the last paragraph because the story could use a little part about Saeng. And what she is planning to do next. Also the author December have added that paragraph bec... |
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ESSAY: Obstacles such as nature, safety issues, and weight as well as length of the dirigible were obstacles that the builders of the Empire State building faced in trying to allow dirigibles to d... |
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ESSAY: In the text, the features of the setting greatly affect the cyclist. For example, the text states, “There was no one in sight, not a building, or structure of any kind.” This made the cycli... |
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ESSAY: I believe laughter is an important part of any relationship. In all my relationships whether it be friends,family,or a girlfriend laughter is always an important element of all of them. t... |
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ESSAY: The features of the setting affected the cyclist greatly. Fem the ghost town to the bait shop, it was all a challenge for him. A misleading challenge , But a challenge . In the desert is we... |
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ESSAY: One of the biggest problems that the author faced in his essay was his surroundings. The setting of the story in Yosemite provided many obstacles such as the vastness of the park, the summe... |
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ESSAY: The mood of the story is happy. Everyone spend time with their family, having fun together, celebrating together would give you a happy feeling of what a family is. It's like how the family... |
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ESSAY: The mood created by the author in this memoir is one of happiness, safety, and care. Narciso had parents who loved him and a very close-knit community. All the descriptions of his family co... |
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ESSAY: Dear Local Newspaper, Computers have a positive effect on people. With a computer you could do so many things! They provide plenty of information, communication, and even entertainment. The... |
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ESSAY: I think the effects of the computer are bad, these are my three reasons why I think its bad; FIRSTLY, the computer could cause blindness to people when they spend too much time or hours on ... |
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ESSAY: Imagine our beautiful town filled with unhealthy, lazy, noninteracting and addicted people. The issue to grapple with is should you the local people, spend more time on computers or not, I ... |
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ESSAY: Minfong Ho concluded “Winter Hibiscus” with the lines “when they come back, Saeng vowed silently to herself, in the spring, when the snows melt and the geese return and this hibiscus is bud... |
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ESSAY: In the memoir "Rodriguez" by Rodriguez he describes the mood. The first thing is that the mood is love. For starters he says "growing up in this envionment instilled in me a great sense tha... |
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ESSAY: During the time of the 1930s's many obstacles came into play to the architects building a dirigible dock for them to land on top of the Empire State building. The builders had to face situa... |
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ESSAY: In the story many different settings affected the author in many different ways. In the very beginning of his journey he came across a ghost town. He reacted to the features of this setting... |
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ESSAY: In the memoir "Narciso Rodriguez" by Narciso Rodriguez a certain mood is created by the author. The mood is happiness and joyfulness because in this memoir the author continues to talk on a... |
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ESSAY: In the selection “Do not exceed posted speed limit” there are a lot of great details of the area around the cyclist. In the text, it makes it clear that the route the cyclist is traveling i... |
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ESSAY: To a cyclist, the surrounding setting can either cause triumph or despair. The cyclist was given very old directions. He was given back roads that are abandoned now. These towns had no peop... |
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ESSAY: Dear Friend: The effects that computers have on me is that it teaches me hand-eye coordination. I learn stuff from the computer, and it is a fun thing to go on. But, I mean those are only m... |
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ESSAY: The architects could not simply drop a mooring mast on top of the Empire State building flat roof. When they tryed to build it there was not enough space so they tried to force it but that ... |
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ESSAY: The complex features of the setting affect the cyclist negatively throughout this story. His trip goes from bad to worse as he progresses to Yosemite. After taking directions from the “old ... |
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ESSAY: All of the materials in a library shold have to be check out of the library before anyone can take them out of the library. Which the librarian should make sure that anything that goes out ... |
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ESSAY: In attempting to allow dirigibles to dock on the Empire State Building, the builders faced a few problems. First, they had to figure out a practical way this could be done. When they decide... |
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ESSAY: I will be talking about, do think books, music, or even magazines should be removed from libraries if they are found offensive. In my opinion I don't think books, music, movies, or magazine... |
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ESSAY: Ok some books can be really offensive and some magazines can be bad like this one sports magazine i read talked about some atheletes and their accidents. like one article was talking about ... |
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ESSAY: One day in the beginning of foll, Alice was watching TV.V. As she was watching, a commercial comes on and says that the final movie, of a very popular series, is coming to theaters tomorrow... |
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ESSAY: Rodriguez remembers his child hood fondly in his memoir about his home in New Jersey. He creates a setting that many people can relate to because of the general feel of family and heritage.... |
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ESSAY: After reading ”Winter Hibiscus” by Minfong Ho. I believe Ho ended the story with that paragraph to support her idea of overcoming obstacles. First after failing her driving test, Saeng was... |
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ESSAY: Dear Esteemed Reader Name I believe it is true many people use computers and that many more will use them in the future. Computers are a standard of the buissnes world and are hevily depend... |
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ESSAY: Mooring mast was added to the top of the building where it would allow dirigibles to anchor there for several hours for refueling or service, and to let passengers on and off. Dirigibles we... |
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ESSAY: What if one day you took a trip to the library, and you came across a book that was offensive? Would you ask for it to be taken off the shelf or just ignore it? Every year tons of INDIVIDUA... |
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ESSAY: The author creates many woods in this memoir. Firstly, a mood that the author sets is warmth. Figuretive warmth. For example in paragraph 1, "Here, the innocence of childhood, the congregat... |
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ESSAY: Dear Friend, I am writing you this letter to give you my opinion on computer use. In my opinion, I think that some people use and rely on computers too much. Wether it be for a research pro... |
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ESSAY: There are many different styles of literature and media in this world. With this variety, it has to please at least one person. If not, why was it made? There come a point when things jus... |
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ESSAY: When I was patient. Their was a time when I was patient. Their are more and more way’s I get more patient when I’m not in no hurry to do something. I’m going to tell you a true story when I... |
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ESSAY: I know a girl, she’s my friend, and her name is Emily. Emily is a very good person. She eats all her veggies, does all her-home work, and has straigt A’s. Emily only has one problem. She is... |
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ESSAY: Dear Tech Solutions Inc., I am here to talk about my view on computers, about how they help people, and how many people say that kids and adults are spending to much time on them. My first ... |
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From Advancing Student Writing Through Automated Syntax Feedback (AIEER 2024). Code: Essay-Syntax-Feedback.
@inproceedings{zeinalipour2024advancing,
title = {Advancing Student Writing Through Automated Syntax Feedback},
author = {Kamyar Zeinalipour and Mehak Mehak and Fatemeh Parsamotamed and Marco Maggini and Marco Gori},
booktitle = {AI in Education and Educational Research (AIEER 2024)},
pages = {52--66},
year = {2024},
publisher = {Springer},
doi = {10.1007/978-3-031-93409-4_5},
url = {https://arxiv.org/abs/2501.07740}
}
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